Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Dear future president


There is a big problem facing our country . The problem is that immigrants are trying to become a citizen so we could help them. first,immigrants are poor. Second some of them are struggling. Third is that they do not know how speak English.

Immigrants are poor first their money is a different value in America.Second is that they can't afford things with a little bit of money third is that they do not have jobs some of them work but it is dangerous jobs and they could get hurt. For that reason immigrants are poor.

There is a second problem in our country. The problem is that some immigrants are struggling. Some immigrants are sneaking to come here. Second some immigrants do not have a home and they are trying to get one and some lost their homes. Some women came pregnant and their baby might die. For that reason immigrants are suffering.

The last problem facing our country is that immigrants do not speak English they can get confused. They might do something bad and they might break a law with out knowing. Some immigrants does not have friends and it will take a long time to figure by their self. Immigrants do not have help because they also do not have no one to help them.

I recommend that you should make immigrants become citizen easier. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Wednesday, October 15, 2008

the adventures of the beast




It was a sunny after noon school was about to end but Brian stood siently because I was using super hearing and the bell ringed. I saw every body leaving the class I also heard every body screaming and talking and I went the beast and I follwed the noise the weather was hot but it was to far so I went back.I was chasing the noise because it seemed like trouble. My secret identity was the beast I was tall strong and had long hair he was the strongest but not the best but he was friends with a lot of super hero`s like shark boy he looked like super man and he also a shark ,sid the kid the ultamate crime solver he looked like he had a black suit andshoulder plateus with spikes and on the shirt said crime solver.
What does the beast look like? Why did you follow the noise at the beginning? -Mr. Spevack 9/22/08 2:09 PM
the beast super powers was super strength, healer like when some one attacked him he can heal fast a other power is flight and super hearing and senses. When they attack him he knows.His enemy was the evil maniac. the beast had never had a side kick I always wanted one but I never found one before.

At the same day my mother said that she and my father will go out so I have to stay home alone so they went out so at night I became the beast.So I went out and there was that noise again so I went all the way to Time Square and it was the evil maniac attacking and then a saw a other person attacking him it was a kid so I helped him and I asked him if he wants to be my side kick and he accepted and had a side kick and both of us will stop evil.

Friday, September 19, 2008

my first blog post

September19,2008

Brian Blog Draft

Intro-BlogMY name is BRIAN I go to school CIS339.My ela teacher is Mr. spevack. What i like most about my ela is the computers.We are bloging about super hero memoir,writing,reading,essays.


Body-goals
My body goals is mastering 80 percent.I will accomplish my goals by doing my homework reading 30 minutes and more do essays of the week do my time sheet.
It is important because it gives you good grades and you might pass the test.I like funny books,mystery books,and scary books.The book i am reading is goesbumps say cheese and die.I am writing about super hero memoir.